ACT考试写作如何高效突破10分？

　　ACT考试全称“American College Test”，中文名称为“美国大学入学考试”。

 

　　它是美国大学本科的入学条件之一，也是奖学金发放的重要依据之一，由ACT INC主办。那我们具体来看一下act考试写作如何突破8分，取得8分以上的成绩。

 

　　下面是一篇范文，我们来分析一下它的优点在哪里。
 

 

　　厨师、名人和许多餐馆都在推广健康食品。不过，那里仍然有很多垃圾食品连锁店。我们应该考虑为什么人们总是吃不健康的食物。

 

　　观点一：健康食品通常是有机的和新鲜的。然而，它们不容易获得，而且价格昂贵，这就是为什么人们选择垃圾食品而不是健康食品。

 

　　观点二，人们根据自己的文化选择食物。他们不会根据食物的营养价值来选择食物。因此，无论健康与否，他们都会继续吃他们传统上吃的食物。

 

　　观点三：人们根据口味选择食物。除非有人能生产出味道和垃圾食品一样好的健康食品，否则人们会继续吃垃圾食品

 

　　范文：

 

　　In today’s society,people cannot live without social medias that contain many influencers showing off their popular life styles.Young people are the community that follows the trend the most easily and absorb the popular culture as their own,which changed their social values and their development,considering they have the most time to spend on the internet and in front of television.Therefore,popular culture has the most influence on young people’s life.

 

　　Although in traditional view,parents are the people that play the most important roles in shaping their children’s identity because they shared the most quality time together,the situation has changed due to the popularization of social medias,which make young people spend more time apart from their family to explore online;therefore,children no longer spend the most time with their parents anymore.Moreover,school and part time jobs take up the rest of family times,which makes the time of parenting decreased,so students today have less chances to be guided by their parents and mimic their parents’acts,even though they live under the same roof.

 

　　Additionally,compared to parents,whose every single aspect is seen by their children,those public figures’negative sides always remain hidden,so teenagers are more likely to follow them voluntarily.It is known that the information the public received has been improved,and that is the reason why the celebrities always seem more attractive than common people,which promotes young people to follow the opinions led by them and chase after their behaviors.On the other hand,parents usually represent the daily image in our lives,so young people,who are at this certain age that want to experience excitement rather than being mediocre,do not look up to their parents as much as their idols.

 

　　Moreover,young people are the most likely to be influenced by the social trends since they always know the most convenient access from their peers or from internet.Knowing so,social medias developed various ways to capture young people’s attention,for example,Tiktok attracts young people by presenting easily made short videos that fits their personal taste;The media market developed so many platforms that students spent most their time on the medias after school,and since the public has its fixed value everywhere like being skinny and athletic is the only way to gain popularity,young people are influenced by it subconsciously,because they have not formed their independent and mature judgment and identity yet.

 

　　To put in a nutshell,young people today are more influenced by the medias and their idols of the popular culture more than by their parents,because the social medias and internet platforms have taken up too much of their time that they no longer have the time with their families for their parents,and they are more willing to follow the trend set by their idols.

 

　　我们可以看到这篇文章的思路是非常清晰的，在四个评分标准上都能完成的很好：

 

　　To effectively address the topic or task；Well-organized and developed,using clearly and appropriate explanations,exemplifications and/or details；To display unity,progression and coherence；To display consistent facility in the use of language.

 

　　因此最后也能够取得很好的分数。关于考试和出国留学的任何问题，欢迎咨询我们A加未来的老师们，我们很乐意解答大家的问题。